Class Comments

Anastasiya: 

Famous First Line: Hey Anastasiya! I think this piece is funny and really light-hearted and I love that. I feel like many people share this view point and the way you went about it was easy to read. Great Job!

Famous Last Line: Anastasiya this is such a cute story. I love that you made the story sort of revolve around the two being misunderstood and judged but still made the ending positive. Great job reinventing the last line and great job in general!

Dream Marks on My Pillow: This is such an amazing piece! I really relate to this and I know long distance is not easy. I love the way you connected talking to him being like a sleeping pill. I love this!

6 Word Memoir: I love this Anastasiya! You've taken such a simple phrase and made it have so much meaning behind it.

Black out: There is such a sense of pain behind this black out. I love your writing style you really are able to make a strong point out of very few words.

Nichole:

6 Word Memoir: Hey Nichole! These are all deep phrases and I love the way you got such a sense of passion across in just six words! Amazing Job! I also love the one about music that is such a true thing and I love the way you wrote it.

If I Were in Charge of the World: I love the line about forgetting to fix your hair I completely understand that! I love what you said in the first passage too. Those are all things that shouldn't exist and I love that you added that serious note. Great job!

Pillow Talk: 

Thank you so much for sharing this Nichole. You captured such an intense sense of emotion through this and I'm so glad you shared this because it takes a lot of courage to do. Great job!

Fly Away From: This is such a strong piece! I love your word choice and I love how you can really tell the emotion behind it. You really captured the way a lot of us feel and this is just such a good piece. 

Memorable Passage: I really like the reasoning you have behind your feelings towards this passage.This is a great passage thank you so much for sharing!