Sunday, September 4, 2016




Karlee
-I am poem: I really enjoyed what you said about questioning your beliefs I think that is really important. I also loved the descriptive wording you used it made the poem really come to life.
-Object post: Karlee I really loved this! I liked your use of a more cynical type of character that could be more relatable to people. I also really enjoyed you kind of poking fun at these characters with some of the phrasing you added. I just really loved this story!

Katheryn
-I am:  I love this Katheryn! You really do put others before yourself and I've experienced it first hand you couldn't be a better friend to people. I absolutely adore how passionate you are about everything you do, keep doing what you love!
- Object story:  Hey Katheryn! I absolutely loved how heartfelt this story was. I loved how you recalled such a fond memory and really built off of it. I also appreciate how you can really tell how much this meant to you. This was an incredible story, great job!

Charli:
-I am poem: I love how open you were in this piece. You gave us insight into the things that shaped you and were not afraid to put the "not so good" moments in your poem too and I loved that. You have an incredible talent for writing and I am so excited to read what you write throughout this class. Thank you for sharing!
-Object story: Charli this was such a powerful story! I love your ability to captivate an audience and keep me on the edge of my seat the whole time. This piece was absolutely incredible I was not expecting the turn it took but it takes a really good writer to write a piece like this. Thank you so much for sharing!


Hannah:
- I am poem:I love this Hannah! You really get a sense of who you are in many different aspects of life and I love that you give us a glimpse of some of the specific moments that really shaped you as a person! Really really great poem!
-Object story:Hi Hannah! I really loved all of these stories. I like how well rounded the elephant story was. I also really appreciated the detail you put into all of the stories.


Ryan:
I am: Hey Ryan! I loved how you talked about not just the things that shape you but the places and culture too. I love that you are always willing to cheer people up that is such an important quality. Thank you so much for sharing this poem.

1 comment:

  1. Thank you for offering such thorough feedback, Taylor! I appreciate your attention to detail and I'm sure your classmates do, too.

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