Color Comments

Charli:

Paint Chip Poetry: Hey Charli, I loved all of these pieces! Your "Lotus Mirage" poem had such vivid imagery and really spoke to me. Also your last poem took such an interesting take on that photo and I absolutely loved it! You are such a talented writer and with these pieces you showcased several different writing styles and executed them so well! Keep up the good work!

Color Collage: Great job putting the intricate details about the ways the eggs look. I loved how you made these haikus about the faberge eggs! Great work!

Color Story: Charli! This piece is so amazing and moving! I love how it ended! You made such an excellent story from something so simple as colors. Such a great story, great job!

Samantha:

Haiku: I love the way your imagery made me feel like I was there. Amazing word choice. Great job!!

Acrostic: This was so incredibly moving Samantha. Thank you so much for sharing this piece. This was such a beautiful poem the line "sadness fills the rooms he no longer does" was so moving. Keep up the amazing work!

Paint chip: This was such a relatable poem! I love the way you took the main friends and made it almost as a reflection of their lives now through their children. Great job!

Paint Chip: I really relate to this poem. I liked the way you made it feel so real. Great work!

Paint Chip: I absolutely love The Bachelorette! You really captured the viewing experience of the show. Great job!!

Paint Chip:You perfectly described exactly how football games go. This piece will be really nice to look back on later and remember these high school memories.

Color Story:This was such a lovely story! I loved the way you ended it too. The imagery was incredible!